My Writing!

Kia ora Bloggers! 

today I will be telling you about my writing and what i have been doing.

so i have been learning the four elements in writing or it was seven I'm  not quite sure. but the elements that i remember was hear,touch feel, see, and that's all i remember! 

but i we did some writing to put some or either how much you can put in your writing! 

anyways here is my link to my writing because it is to big https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZrRFGOOyHIPBzcsfY4kZ1LctNuFIiD3xtElhTNuvKls/edit

anyway bye for now 

and stay home 

My Adventure Narrative Writing

This week, Miss Lee told us to write a fabulous pobble narrative writing. We had to use tools to help us in our writing like adjectives,nouns,alliteration,Similes,verbs  and nouns also metaphors to. Alliteration is something that has the same letter at the front it also at least has 3 words with the same letter sound of the front. So I tried to use as much as those but normally I used adjectives the most.

I chose to write about a Narrative writing the characters was Storm Luna and her mum.

Can you rate my writing to one to ten? did you also like my writing?


hope you like my writing

Jungle Writing

Hey bloggers ,

This week room 3 wrote about a moment in time in the jungle. We have been learning about lots of different language tools like adjectives,verbs,alliteration and similes and also nouns and metaphors,adverbs . I know that a adjective is a describing word. I know that a adverb is describing a verb. I tried to use as many of these language tools as I could as I imagine myself in the jungle so I tried to imagine what the animals could do and more!

This is the image we used to imagine ourselves in the jungle and what could we do to describe what we can hear smell taste and more!

                                                                           The bottom is what we used to write our writing.

This is my piece of writing can you search for adverbs adjectives, alliteration and metaphors,similes.

Describing My Holiday.

 Kia ora bloggers 

at room 3 I have been trying to  describe my holiday.

I also have been describing what I was doing on the computer 

hope you like it!

Biteable!! Sea Mammals

   

sea mammles on Biteable.                   

Kia Ora  bloggers today I have been doing a biteable video in school 

and this one is about sea mammals hope you like it !!

Some facts about a pully!!

at room three we have been building a simple machine so here is my slide hope you like it

My Dream Playground

                                                                   Kia ora
                                       At school I have been using venngage to write
                                                         my dream playground

                                                             hope you like it

                 

Venngage

This is my venngage poster hope you like it. it was made by my persuasive writing it is about mufti

plan and my persuasive writing

room 3 has been working hard to do our persuasive writing so here is mine hope you like it.

Weekend

so we were going to make a recreation of our weekend and I have a lot to tell you so here is some also I hope you like my weekend writing.

the secret and mysterious portal

I have been describing a pobble picture for my writing and this is a post about a girl who had a hard time with her family.