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Thursday, August 22, 2019

My Dream Playground

                                                                   Kia ora
                                       At school I have been using venngage to write
                                                         my dream playground

                                                             hope you like it
                 
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  1. AnonymousSeptember 2, 2019 at 9:40 AM

    Hi Izza,
    I love your hook-in sentence that starts off your writing!
    You have so many reasons - could you think of a different sentence beginning for each reason, rather than using 'also'?
    You can go on the class site to find different sentence beginnings, like 'next', 'secondly', or 'moreover'.
    Keep up the great work!
    From Miss Lee

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