This week room 3 wrote about a moment in time in the jungle. We have been learning about lots of different language tools like adjectives,verbs,alliteration and similes and also nouns and metaphors,adverbs . I know that a adjective is a describing word. I know that a adverb is describing a verb. I tried to use as many of these language tools as I could as I imagine myself in the jungle so I tried to imagine what the animals could do and more!
This is the image we used to imagine ourselves in the jungle and what could we do to describe what we can hear smell taste and more!
This is my piece of writing can you search for adverbs adjectives, alliteration and metaphors,similes.
Hey Izza, I really how you explained a lot about the Jungle and you maked it really interesting for the reader and I really got hooked in! This mae me think about how it would be like if you spent your whole life in a jungle! Maybe next time you could add something else than I smell and I see and stuff like that so then it won't get boring.
ReplyDeleteGood Job anyways!
- Kylie