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Thursday, November 21, 2019

My Adventure Narrative Writing

This week, Miss Lee told us to write a fabulous pobble narrative writing. We had to use tools to help us in our writing like adjectives,nouns,alliteration,Similes,verbs  and nouns also metaphors to. Alliteration is something that has the same letter at the front it also at least has 3 words with the same letter sound of the front. So I tried to use as much as those but normally I used adjectives the most.

I chose to write about a Narrative writing the characters was Storm Luna and her mum.

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  1. AnonymousDecember 3, 2019 at 10:56 AM

    Hi Izza
    I like How you added lot's of detail about your weekend.
    I also wrote about what I did in my naritive writing.
    How about just adding what picture you had.
    You are doing a good job Keep it up!!
    From Roisin

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