My Awesome,Fantastic Story web

Hey Bloggers 

During reading time we read a story. Our group had to read the Beast of Mogil. It is a story about this alien called Meep also this guy called Tim. He was going to help Meep get the king or else the king will beat Meep! But the wild beast was Rusty Tim's cat so when Tim helped Meep put Tim back home.

Room three had to write the characters,setting,problem,outcome/solution and the actions that the characters are doing.

I found this activity okay I also thought that it was easy.

Read the outcome to see what was the solution would you laugh at it if you were there?

Read the problem to see how would you feel?

My Adventure Narrative Writing

This week, Miss Lee told us to write a fabulous pobble narrative writing. We had to use tools to help us in our writing like adjectives,nouns,alliteration,Similes,verbs  and nouns also metaphors to. Alliteration is something that has the same letter at the front it also at least has 3 words with the same letter sound of the front. So I tried to use as much as those but normally I used adjectives the most.

I chose to write about a Narrative writing the characters was Storm Luna and her mum.

Can you rate my writing to one to ten? did you also like my writing?


hope you like my writing

What I Learnt While I Was Doing A Blog Scavenger

Hi Bloggers today,I'm going to be telling what I have learnt while I was doing a scavenger hunt but it was blog related.

So I learnt that I don't have that many blog posts because it said on the blog that I had 26. Then after that I went see what was the most popular post so I went back to my blog and saw that "how to make a comment" was the most popular I also found the scavenger hunt a little bit challenging because some of the stuff I did not Understand or I was confused of what it meant.

Jungle Writing

Hey bloggers ,

This week room 3 wrote about a moment in time in the jungle. We have been learning about lots of different language tools like adjectives,verbs,alliteration and similes and also nouns and metaphors,adverbs . I know that a adjective is a describing word. I know that a adverb is describing a verb. I tried to use as many of these language tools as I could as I imagine myself in the jungle so I tried to imagine what the animals could do and more!

This is the image we used to imagine ourselves in the jungle and what could we do to describe what we can hear smell taste and more!

                                                                           The bottom is what we used to write our writing.

This is my piece of writing can you search for adverbs adjectives, alliteration and metaphors,similes.

National Flower

 Kia Ora

bloggers today room 3 have been learning about flowers and we were learning about national flowers.

we were learning why the flower is important to that country like New Zealand,Korean and more.

so here is my one so hope you like it.

Making A Collage

                                                                          Kia ora
                                                      at room 3 we were working on cybersmart
                                      and we were working on making a colllage on workspace.
                                            A collage is something that is coloured but textured
                                     so you draw but it is Suppose to have a texture that has a colour .
                                                       but anyways hope you like my collage.

Describing My Holiday.

 Kia ora bloggers 

at room 3 I have been trying to  describe my holiday.

I also have been describing what I was doing on the computer 

hope you like it!