My Awesome,Fantastic Story web

Hey Bloggers 

During reading time we read a story. Our group had to read the Beast of Mogil. It is a story about this alien called Meep also this guy called Tim. He was going to help Meep get the king or else the king will beat Meep! But the wild beast was Rusty Tim's cat so when Tim helped Meep put Tim back home.

Room three had to write the characters,setting,problem,outcome/solution and the actions that the characters are doing.

I found this activity okay I also thought that it was easy.

Read the outcome to see what was the solution would you laugh at it if you were there?

Read the problem to see how would you feel?

My Adventure Narrative Writing

This week, Miss Lee told us to write a fabulous pobble narrative writing. We had to use tools to help us in our writing like adjectives,nouns,alliteration,Similes,verbs  and nouns also metaphors to. Alliteration is something that has the same letter at the front it also at least has 3 words with the same letter sound of the front. So I tried to use as much as those but normally I used adjectives the most.

I chose to write about a Narrative writing the characters was Storm Luna and her mum.

Can you rate my writing to one to ten? did you also like my writing?


hope you like my writing

What I Learnt While I Was Doing A Blog Scavenger

Hi Bloggers today,I'm going to be telling what I have learnt while I was doing a scavenger hunt but it was blog related.

So I learnt that I don't have that many blog posts because it said on the blog that I had 26. Then after that I went see what was the most popular post so I went back to my blog and saw that "how to make a comment" was the most popular I also found the scavenger hunt a little bit challenging because some of the stuff I did not Understand or I was confused of what it meant.